You need to stop making your posts so short. Notice how everyone else can make a good five or six sentence post out of something like the funeral, where as you can barely make one? I'm getting very annoyed, and I'm sure the others are too. Short posts are grounds for booting you, remember. You haven't made even one good sized post. I'll give you a few more chances, but you're stretching it.
I understand that it's hard to make a reply post, but seriously? A one liner. Add some detail about Vor's arrival. Also, Rafael doesn't know his name and, well, it's a one liner. That is a no no in the RP rules, which you should probably look through. Read previous posts and maybe some from other RP's. Too many short posts is grounds for kicking someone out.
Sorry if it seems like I'm being hard on you, but this is my first RP that has made it past page one, and I want it to do well.
You need to work on consistancy in your posts. You're using both third and first person views, as well as speaking in the present tense. It is very hard to read things like that. Choose one point of view, and please use past tense. If you are utterly confused by what I'm saying, just read some of the other posts.