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  1. Blastinus
    21 Hours Ago 06:44 PM
    Blastinus
    Mimi was definitely the character that had a lot of development. It was just so much fun to see how much she grew during her adventure in the DigiWorld. And it's always the opposite Children/Digimon pairings that are my favorites, like Mimi and Palmon, Jyou and Gomamon, or Miyako and Hawkmon.

    I have played the first Digimon World game! It's been years since I played it, especially since I could never keep a Digimon alive long enough to make it far through the game. I've always preferred the regular RPG games, like Digimon World 3 or Digimon World DS. Though Digimon World Championship is a great time-waster!
  2. Squirrel
    5 Days Ago 06:04 AM
    Squirrel
    TK was always pretty fun but I don't feel like he was given the same character development as some of the others - it's a shame since he was one of my favourites too haha. Mimi probably ended up being my overall favourite just because she's so much fun to laugh at, but I especially loved her interactions with Palmon. It was nice seeing them start off as such opposites but then start becoming more alike as the episodes went on. Plus who doesn't love copious amounts of Numemon/Sukamon stories? ;p

    I don't suppose you've ever played the Digimon World PSX game?
  3. Blastinus
    1 Week Ago 06:07 PM
    Blastinus
    I could never pick my favorite. :[ All of the Child Digimon from Adventure were my favorite as some point while I was watching the show. But Patamon is higher on my list of favorites because Takeru's my favorite Chosen ever. The Patamon from Frontier was also adorable, and helped me to love Patamon!

    I don't think there is a Child Digimon I don't like.
  4. Squirrel
    1 Week Ago 06:02 PM
    Squirrel
    Yaaay Patamon, he was always my favourite from Adventure ♥
  5. Squirrel
    November 10th, 2013 01:28 PM
    Squirrel
    Aw okay haha, thanks anyway!
  6. Blastinus
    November 10th, 2013 01:13 PM
    Blastinus
    I haven't played any sort of Minecraft in months. So I don't know of any Pixelmon servers. :(
  7. Squirrel
    November 10th, 2013 11:23 AM
    Squirrel
    Hiya, do you play Pixelmon often/know of any good servers for it? Me and Olli have spent all day looking but they're all so laggy that it's unplayable haha. If you've got any recommendations I'll pay you in cute Dedenne pictures!
  8. Blastinus
    October 5th, 2013 07:59 PM
    Blastinus
    I'm actually really happy with Mega Charizard. He reminds me of someone that always makes me smile. :)

    Still, if you want to switch to one of the others, go ahead! It'll just be weird to see you as something other than an adorable rodent. <3
  9. Squirrel
    October 5th, 2013 07:41 PM
    Squirrel
  10. Blastinus
    September 29th, 2013 09:29 PM
    Blastinus
  11. Squirrel
    September 25th, 2013 02:28 AM
    Squirrel
    "It can also plug its tail into outlets to drain electricity from them." With anything else that would be annoying but HOW DARN CUTE IS THAT IMAGE :(((
  12. Blastinus
    September 24th, 2013 06:11 PM
    Blastinus


  13. Squirrel
    August 23rd, 2013 04:33 AM
    Squirrel
    Congrats! The orange suits you :D
  14. Squirrel
    December 14th, 2012 07:00 PM
    Squirrel
    Happy birthday :)
  15. Blastinus
    September 25th, 2012 06:00 PM
    Blastinus
    It took me a month to respond? Yeesh.

    Actually, that kind of answers the first question. I haven't read a Pokemon fanfic without the intentions of reviewing it in over a year. So all I've read are ones that very clearly need improvements. You could try the Fanfiction of the Month list, which is the best of FF&W as voted by the community. If you want to read a bigger variety than just what PC offers, I'll find the list my friends suggested for me that covers various sites.

    As for your own writing, my only suggestions are:

    -Grammar could use a little cleaning. There weren't any major mistakes that were distracting. I only found them when I went looking for them.

    -More description. I don't know if maybe it was from the format of your post (since it's not actually a story but it still is), but I would have liked to see more of the character's thoughts and feelings. This got better towards the end of the entry when Cheryl died, but it was missing a little in the beginning. There's also the advice that Pokemon battles could always use more description to make them interesting. Up the stakes a little. This will also add to the Pokemon's personalities so that their triumphs and possible deaths hit the reader harder.

    I hope this helps and makes a little sense. I can explain more if need be. If you have any other writings, I'd be willing to look them over and hopefully respond to them sooner than a month!

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