Well, sure, that works. Just, as we talked about, have Caedmon not being someone in charge Also, if you plan to say anything about how it went down in there, or just hint at it, just remember that Caedmon did this, mainly to get answers. Not just to turn himself over and work with them in an instant. He simply gives himself to them, for them to do as they wish.
I was thinking it can be more behind the scenes. In essence I'll make the next post and it'll be about how Caedmon was already talked to and Damon will come in later and will protest. By the next post we can just have it where Caedmon and Damon gather the soldiers together again and Damon being rather mean toward Caedmon.
Hey Gregs! I figure that the next reply I'll be doing is our joined post, so we can get the whole "Caedmon talks to leader fellow" over in one hit. I can't really reply with much as it is now, anyway What do you think?