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Conversation Between Pppgggr and PkMnTrainer Yellow
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  1. Pppgggr
    October 19th, 2012 05:19 PM
    Pppgggr
    Eh, I don't see that as too major of an issue. One fairly minor character won't affect things too much.
  2. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    October 19th, 2012 05:14 PM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    You could ask Skymin to toss the rating in. That's all my thoughts.

    Also, I meant the pairing. As in calling them lovers. Disregarding the fact that Yellow's canonity is... highly questionable.
  3. Pppgggr
    October 19th, 2012 05:09 PM
    Pppgggr
    As for the rating, I attempted to add it into the title later on, but it wouldn't update. As for the pokemon league, I can whip something up.....But when it comes to Johto, I feel no need to mention anything. The apocalypse is world-wide, but I'm simply focusing on Kanto. It can be assumed that Johto has its own issues.

    As for your third comment, Jessie and James were in Yellow. Wouldn't that make them cannon?
  4. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    October 19th, 2012 05:03 PM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    Alright... Let's see... I looked over your entire RP and here is what I have to say.

    First, a rating. Your RP lacks a rating, which considering it's dark context is pretty... it'd be nice to have the rating as a warning. On PC's Roleplay Corner we use fiction ratings, which can be seen here: http://www.fictionratings.com/ You could plausibly get away with T, but given what I know about your posting habbits... I would honestly recommend you go with M. The reason I say this is if you give it a lower rating and then get too mature? It becomes Skymin's problem and you could get infracted, which is a very serious thing and not worth the risk considering there aren't many downsides to giving it an M rating (other than people looking to avoid a mature roleplay not looking at it) Note that MA roleplays are not allowed, and thus anything that is too mature for M is against the forum rules. Technically all roleplays are supposed to have ratings, but at this point you could probably get away with just... not changing it since Skymin didn't enforce it. |D


    Second, the places. I noticed you're missing the Pokemon League. Note that the pokemon league presents a plot hole because the story takes place 5 years later, and thus after 2nd Gen, therefore there's a route to johto near there. You could probably easily find a way to deal with that.


    Third, I looked over the NPCs and one thing caught my eye. James. I might point out that shipping is a dangerous subject in pokemon regarding canon characters. However, the Team Rocket trio is a relatively safe couple by a long shot. Just something to keep in mind.


    Fourth... I honestly feel like the roleplay is missing... /something/! I'm not sure what, but it feels like the roleplay could benefit from something more added to it. That's all that's on my mind, honestly. ^^;
  5. Pppgggr
    October 19th, 2012 06:11 AM
    Pppgggr
    It's part of pokemon, and I'd be much appreciative if you looked it over. It's here: http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=289854

    Thanks so much.
  6. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    October 18th, 2012 09:56 PM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    I can't say I know who to recommend there. If you wanted me to look over a roleplay, I suppose I could. Just keep in mind that if it's a pokemon roleplay I'm reasonably opinionated about the series, and if it's not, and it's based on a series I don't know much about, it might impede my ability to give advice.
  7. Pppgggr
    October 18th, 2012 08:19 PM
    Pppgggr
    Hey Yellow, a roleplay I submitted was recently accepted and I'm incredibly new at the task of GMing. I was wondering if you knew someone experienced who might be willing to assist me. Also, I know that you've started and run quite a few successful roleplays and I was wondering if you'd be willing to look over the post and give me your opinion as to what I should add or revise.
  8. Pppgggr
    October 12th, 2012 05:04 PM
    Pppgggr
    Ok then.
  9. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    October 12th, 2012 04:42 PM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    Of course! Feel free to do so immediately. They're right near the base. You can tell Lucy is wounded from quite a distance.
  10. Pppgggr
    October 12th, 2012 02:24 PM
    Pppgggr
    Hey Yellow, Recently an IC situation has arisen in Fallout that's going to cause me to leave my group. We were already near Mt. Coronet and I was wondering if it'd be alright if I stumbled upon your group and your fight against the NPC boss upon leaving.

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