Hello, just dropping a VM to comment on your last post, which I've discussed with my Co-GM and have found that what you had done was bunny our NPCs, which is unfortunately not acceptable. I advise you to re-edit your post and refrain from doing this. We usually don't like it when others bunny our NPCs without permission from one of us, and in this case I'm afraid you don't have that permission, sorry. :( This will obviously change your post quite a bit, and we apologize.
Also, I advise you to change what you've been saying. You've been writing 'Stone of Ardor', when we specifically mentioned it as being the 'Orb of Ardor'. A slight difference, but hopefully nothing too much to be a problem to fix.
This is the only post you have to read, as it entails exactly what the whole visit to the tower is about. The rest of the posts by the others is basic debate on providing more information and a bit of uncertainty. Your next post by now should really only have one basic thing: an answer to the question. The rest you can be a bit more vague on, if you don't feel like reading through all of the others (though I recommend you still read all 'Knight' posts nonetheless).
I there anything important I should keep in mind before I post? Given that I've pretty much missed 3 whole weeks (which I apologize in advance for), it'd be a lot of reading to catch up on and it'd more than like take longer to read them all than to just post with a separate guideline ...
Truth be told, I made the sign-up and posted the unfinished version, planning on getting someones opinion on what should or should not be in it. However, as time went by, I'd mistakenly forgotten to cone back to it, and left Ladamer as is.
I'll be editing the post now, and be sure to message any necessary members concerning its completion.
Hello! I noticed you sign up for our RP, Hyrus. I just wanted to inform you of a problem Raikiri and I found with your sign up. It's clear to us that you've had some experience RPing perhaps on a different forum, but here on PC, we generally require a much more descriptive section for a character's personality. I must insist that you build on your personality a bit and describe Ladamer a bit more thoroughly (examples can be found in the thread of others RPer's characters). Your appearance and history is more than adequate however.
Another problem is that you have listed that you wish to be a sort of bodyguard of Raelus, which is fine, but you should still be on the side of the knights, perhaps sent to Ekilore as a representative of the Raelusian King. Since your character is nobility and an advisory aide to the King, it would fit.
Also, it would be great if you could provide an RP sample with your SU as well, perhaps from a post you just recently made on PC, or make one up if you haven't gotten a chance to make one yet.
Other than that, the SU is fine. Make the necessary changes and we can fully review your SU. Good luck!