The poses are getting better, but like you said, the walls are a little weird. The thing I would work on the most would be shading. If you can get it right, you can really get the fact across that the ninetales is now a plushie. Shade it like Pyra is sinking into the plushie, and I think it will come across a lot clearer, as well as make Sai(?) look softer. Aside from the walls, the colors are pretty smooth, and the poses look more natural. I like the Floatzel on the wall, the angle fits very nicely with the actual perception you're viewing it from.
I'm pretty sure he will. He always has before, even when I was just doing things for him without them being part of a trade.
Also: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15899510/ Yeah, I know the one wall's kind of messy (my dark green marker was drying out so I couldn't get the tones nice and even like the other one), but what do you think? I'm trying to develop kind of a storybook illustration style for pics involving my Vulpix OC Pyra.
Well, he paid for an $80 transformation sequence for me (which he originally intended as a gift) featuring my Skunk OC Orion turning into a cow (don't ask why, I just like cow transformations). Leveling with him, I've agreed to do a few random drawings featuring his Totodile Shiny in random mischief as well as like one or two short stories. He's pretty easy to satisfy, so it's not that much work for me, though I intend to do my best in return for his generosity.
One of my friends on FA, ShinyTotodude (aka Marc) offered to pay for a commission for me. In return, I've agreed to draw and write a few things for him. All clean works, of course. He isn't of the boat that's into adult-rated content, though some of the stuff he's into gets kind of crazy.