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  1. The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    August 28th, 2012 12:51 PM
    The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    Thanks for your remarks, they give me courage to go on ;D As for the long paragraphs, it comes natural to me - I like the concept and my creations, so I write so much stuff without even realising it. xD

    I've checked out your chapter. It was neat, as always, I like how clear and simple yet entertaining your writing style is. I also sympathize with the character, Arthur; he seems like what most of us would be if we were the younglings of a Pokemon world. Good job man, good job, keep it up!
  2. Pokemon_Trainer_Danny
    August 27th, 2012 09:54 AM
    Yeah, you definetely have a very professional writing style, if you ask me. Given that I don't read much literature, other than fanfiction... But your chapters are quite long, and the paragraphs are just right. Looks pretty neat to me.
  3. The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    August 27th, 2012 08:53 AM
    The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    Oh, the GTA names are nothing - I've stolen many many more names from other games, as it seems like I'm unable to think of something by myself.. -.- exception is Chantalai's name. xD

    by the way, professional writing style? o: are you sure? xD
  4. The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    August 27th, 2012 08:27 AM
    The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    Thanks man, I appreciate any comments about it, too; though I haven't put my best into these chapters I've already published. xD
  5. Pokemon_Trainer_Danny
    August 27th, 2012 08:17 AM
    Sure thing, I'm always in for reading some fanfiction. I'll start reading Tales of the Hashashin, it sounds very cool!
  6. The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    August 27th, 2012 07:43 AM
    The Prince of Sweet Sorrow
    Oh, that is cool, I'll check it out once I finish writing mine! Check it out if you want, it's slightly a different theme, though xD And no problem ;D
  7. Pokemon_Trainer_Danny
    August 27th, 2012 07:40 AM
    Hey, if you're interested, I posted another chapter of my fanfic... Oh, and thank you for mentioning my typo's. I edited them right away.

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