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Conversation Between Pokemon_Trainer_Danny and Ray Maverick
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  1. Ray Maverick
    August 28th, 2012 12:51 PM
    Ray Maverick
    Thanks for your remarks, they give me courage to go on ;D As for the long paragraphs, it comes natural to me - I like the concept and my creations, so I write so much stuff without even realising it. xD

    I've checked out your chapter. It was neat, as always, I like how clear and simple yet entertaining your writing style is. I also sympathize with the character, Arthur; he seems like what most of us would be if we were the younglings of a Pokemon world. Good job man, good job, keep it up!

  2. Pokemon_Trainer_Danny
    August 27th, 2012 09:54 AM
    Pokemon_Trainer_Danny
    Yeah, you definetely have a very professional writing style, if you ask me. Given that I don't read much literature, other than fanfiction... But your chapters are quite long, and the paragraphs are just right. Looks pretty neat to me.

  3. Ray Maverick
    August 27th, 2012 08:53 AM
    Ray Maverick
    Oh, the GTA names are nothing - I've stolen many many more names from other games, as it seems like I'm unable to think of something by myself.. -.- exception is Chantalai's name. xD

    by the way, professional writing style? o: are you sure? xD

  4. Ray Maverick
    August 27th, 2012 08:27 AM
    Ray Maverick
    Thanks man, I appreciate any comments about it, too; though I haven't put my best into these chapters I've already published. xD

  5. Pokemon_Trainer_Danny
    August 27th, 2012 08:17 AM
    Pokemon_Trainer_Danny
    Sure thing, I'm always in for reading some fanfiction. I'll start reading Tales of the Hashashin, it sounds very cool!

  6. Ray Maverick
    August 27th, 2012 07:43 AM
    Ray Maverick
    Oh, that is cool, I'll check it out once I finish writing mine! Check it out if you want, it's slightly a different theme, though xD And no problem ;D

  7. Pokemon_Trainer_Danny
    August 27th, 2012 07:40 AM
    Pokemon_Trainer_Danny
    Hey, if you're interested, I posted another chapter of my fanfic... Oh, and thank you for mentioning my typo's. I edited them right away.


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