I can't really give an opinion on the BG, since it is soo tiny
Also as far as i can see the text looks good, but I want it alot smaller, I don't want the text to take alot of space.
I want people to see more of the BG.
The "Pokemon" Logo should be placed for that in the exact same spot as in a clean FR rom, and the bottom and top should be black like in my version.
My version is still alot of WIP, since I wanted to experment, I might go and insert the BG separated with 16 colours, once inserting the Arceus, and then the BG alone.
But I gotta test alot on it saturday-sunday.