I'm not really a good writer nor a good analyst so it may not be a very good text also I'll avoid spoiler for those who want to read.
The main reason I liked that fiction is that it touched me, I couldn't explain really, but through the whole text, I laughed, I cried (yeah I'm a man and I cried, is there really a problem?), I got angry...
I also loved the fact that I could see how your writing improved all throughout your fiction.
I never grew tired of the story, even tough it was sometimes slow, it wasn't a bad thing, because at other times, it was a very quick story.
I could almost never guess what was about to happen, even when I tried my hardest, I could never come up with what was truly coming, except some times when it was obvious, but a those time you made it like we knew beforehand.
Well I think those are all the reasons I loved that fiction I hope I didn't forget any. Thanks for reading it all.
There are quite a few reasons why I abandoned that fic though.
The most obvious one is that the spark I had of writing that fic is gone. :\
Also, it's in a script format, which was a pretty nice idea at the time, but as I wrote a few more chapters to it, it made me feel like I'm writing lazily.
I am still writing fics though, but they're not about PKMN, unfortunately.
I am now writing fics about MLP: FiM in FIMFiction. If you are interested, there's a link on my signature.
If it's not too much trouble though, may I ask why you liked that fic o'mine? :\