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Conversation Between Belldandy and Arx
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  1. Belldandy
    July 30th, 2014 07:02 PM
    Belldandy
    Okileedokilees!
  2. Arx
    July 30th, 2014 06:29 PM
    Arx
    Will answer tomorrow, dying of sleep rn.
  3. Belldandy
    July 30th, 2014 06:18 PM
    Belldandy
    Added to KiK
  4. Belldandy
    March 24th, 2014 05:25 PM
    Belldandy
    Yep! Take your time, though, and don't rush. Good writing has patient authors.
  5. Arx
    March 24th, 2014 05:22 PM
    Arx
    Thanks a lot. When I'm done rewriting it, can I send it back to you?
  6. Belldandy
    March 24th, 2014 05:19 PM
    Belldandy
    I'd suggest using it as framework, and rewriting it to be more in-depth, descriptive, etc. The story is good (asides the mega spoilers and unrealistic reactions of the bad guys); it just needs more detail to make the reader relate to the characters and to get a good vision of scene and the characters themselves.
  7. Arx
    March 24th, 2014 02:42 PM
    Arx
    Do you suggest I remake it?
  8. Belldandy
    March 24th, 2014 01:50 PM
    Belldandy
    Yep, just VM me if you need any clarification
  9. Arx
    March 24th, 2014 01:47 PM
    Arx
    Yes, just finished reading it. Thanks a lot! <3
  10. Belldandy
    March 24th, 2014 01:45 PM
    Belldandy
    Did you get the email?

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