Hey man. As what Chili said, an rper to an rper, your posts are too short. It's against the rules actually, so you might get an infraction if you repeat it way too much. Since it looks like you're doing a solo side story in PTA, why not fit all (or some of it) in one huge post. It's better that way. Short posts looks like SPAM posts, eh.
Hey dude. Just saw your post in PTA. It's too short, man. Not to sound bossy or whatnot, but the rules explicitly said that all IC posts must be at least 100 words in length. Try to lengthen it more. If you need any help, just contact any of the longer RPers in the forum. We don't bite.