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Conversation Between OnlyMaster101 and Lash
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  1. OnlyMaster101
    July 7th, 2008 9:57 AM
    Hey thanks for getting my hopes up, I'm not an experienced so i'm righting that Fan Fiction to get better, once again thanks for getting my hopes up!
  2. Lash
    July 6th, 2008 2:13 PM
    I got some more advice for ya: Don't give up. The fact that I was a little bit of a prick right there, but you took the constructive criticism well, I do respect that.

    Just work on your story a lot. For good fanfiction reference, I would recommend reading anything by Bay, Jax, or DarkPersian479.
  3. OnlyMaster101
    July 6th, 2008 1:52 PM
    Oops, sorry about that. 8)
  4. Lash
    July 6th, 2008 11:24 AM
    You call this better, when you can't even comprehend how to spell Chikorita, or that when starting a new paragraph (if anything in there could be considered one), you need to hit enter twice. Take time when writing your chapter(s), make it actually sound good, and paint a good image in the readers head. I can guarantee you, no one, and I mean no one can get a good image when reading the abomination called WALL OF TEXT. Which happens when you only hit enter once.

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