Cheers! I got a couple emails about your comments as well (so in the end you were no longer anonymous =p). I'll check them when not at work, and then actually go and post it sometime this month. :V And worry about editing chapter 2. I hope you liked it.
Just dropping a note to say that this anonymous cheetah just finished reading through your chapter on Google Docs. I left a few comments just on the grammar issues and typos that I noticed. I'll save my comments about the story itself when you post it!
Uni is a smaller part of it actually - the bigger part is moving. Like yesterday in particular, when we actually made the move!. And we don't have net in our new place yet. :V And before that was a lot of packing and etc... so I haven't had as much spare time since my interstate trip a few weeks back, and hence haven't been around as much outside of a certain section. =( Hopefully that'll change soon! (Thanks for your post btw).
It popped out of my 3DS and went bouncing across my desk. But I did a little more searching and found it! But the Atomic Boo boss (the one with the train) is giving me major issues, so I'm taking a break from LM2.