I like the way we just went about doing the first section. Map some stuff, send me previews, and I'll write a segment of the story that corresponds to them. I had vague ideas about what to do but when you showed me the visuals it was significantly easier to write. Also, from here on out, the stories will look a little more like screenplays so that I can more easily incorporate the exact quotes and I don't have to fill them in later. I'll send the dialogue for the first section in a more complete form by some point tonight or early tomorrow.