Thanks for the compliment .. and Yeah I read through it already ha I was going to wait till after my final class at five to do so but after reading the first sentence I was intrigued, I enjoy how you add in your characters memories, it really makes the character feel real. Anyways i'll get to grading your post ether in a few minutes or after I get out of class. Then as soon as Tim0789 and Lilliana finish this chapter will move to the next!
He'll just have Emboar since that's your only pokemon. However if you'd like to add another one in there just to give me a shout out of a future pokemon I can add on a route for you then by all means go ahead.
No thats the current chapter. Chapter four starts with your arrival at Striaton Town and the first post is the gym battle, second is the call from juniper and the part where you pass out at the dream yard, and the last post is the battle with your future self. If you want you can combine the first two posts since.