Sounds interesting, though I noticed a few things:
- Is it ALWAYS Charmander? Removing the choice of starter might annoy some players.
- Pikachu is a bit of a cliched Pokemon
- The programming for having two player characters will be hellishly difficult.
Devan Ketchum was born a year before Ash Ketchum. When Delia Ketchum's husband named ??? (He'll be anonymous for now) asks her if he can take Devan along with him on his journey, Delia hesitantly says yes. Approximately fourteen years later, Devan decides that he wants to start his own journey. He also decides that he wants to find both his mother and younger brother. Then, Devan goes to meet with the Professor whom asks Devan to follow him into the wild so that Devan can learn how to battle in action. However, a scream for help is heard. Devan and the professor run to the wild and notice a boy surrounded by a Rattata and Snubull. The professor decides that this would be a good time for Devan and his Charmander to gain experience. However, the professor also gives Devan another pokeball containing Eevee.
Devan rushes towards the boy and the two (seemingly) wild Pokemon and the two on two battle starts. Devan hands the boy the Pokeball containing Eevee and sends out Charmander. Battle, blah, battle...
During the battle, the owner of the two wild Pokemon is stealing a new found, FIFTH generation Pokemon from the professors lab. However, the Team Universal grunt abandons his Rattata and Snubull and rushes right past them, the professor, Devan and the boy who reveals himself to Devan as Wayne directly after the battle.
Wayne attempts to give the professor back the Eevee, but the professor protests. Saying that he worked well with Eevee and should keep him/her. Then, he looks at Devan and says something like "You are a great trainer, even if you're a beginner. You are certainly your fathers son. And Charmander has grown fond of you in only a short amount of time." Then, he invites both Devan and Wayne back into his Lab.
Nevertheless, when he gets in there, his AID is unconcious on the ground and the trio runs towards him and asks what happened. The AID explains everything and the Professor gives them both a PokeDex and PokeTech and asks them to go and find the Team Universal member and the Pokemon they stole. Devan is about to leave the professors lab when the AID tells him that his father came by and told him to go home because he had a present for him.
Mind you that his father wasn't at home in the beginning of the Hack. He isn't when Devan goes back inside the house either. So, when Devan gets in the house, he sees a Town Map and picks it up. He then sees a Pokeball and note. He reads the note first which says.
I am proud that you're following in my footsteps. I truly believe that you can become a Pokemon Master. To celebrate my happiness and your fifteenth birthday, I left a Town Map and Pokeball containing your second Pokemon.
Devan keeps the note and then grabs the Pokeball. Inside it is a male Lv. 5 Pikachu. Charmander I believe should be at Lv 6 by now and so should Wayne's Eevee.
Now, once Devan leaves his house, *TWAP* He and Wayne run into each other.
Wayne: Hey, Devan! Sorry about that. Anyway, I was wondering if I could join you and your Pokemon. We'd have strength in numbers and plus, we worked good as a team against those wild Pokemon.
Devan: Alright! You can come on this journey with me. I just hope we find this Pokemon.