Hmm, looks like you've run into another wall. Unfortunately, you must provide items as well. And in competitive play, HMs are completely useless (bar surf) How about running through the S&M stickies, like the compiled guides. That'd help. But I still can't approve such, sorry. D: You could use the request a moveset/team stickie for item help, movesets, and what not. What I would suggest is reading alll the guides we have, ask questions in the Q&A stickie, and use that moveset thread to your advantage.
You're getting closer, but you're not there yet. >_< Sorry I sound like a bummer. D: