luxuriate

You should point out specifics of the story that you like. Instead of just saying "This is good", point out what in particular was good about that particular story. Like "This is good. I liked how you wrote [character]'s feelings toward [event]." Even that is better than a general "I like this."

I wasn't planning too but it turns out that way anyway lol sure.

Ohh I understand now. It's fine.

Wait...I'm confused. Your character has Ground and Electric aura? Or am I reading it wrong?

Thanks for the criticism. I did some improvement to the previous two chapters.

No problem. :)

If your Pokémon games were real they'd be called Generation Alloy, lol.

EDIT: In VMs, when somebody sends you one, you reply on his or her page, not yours.