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  1. Deceptio
    9 Hours Ago 10:56 AM
    Thanks man. It's actually designed with my RP character Renegade in mind. XD Since Hei is his face claim.
  2. Bay Alexison
    3 Days Ago 08:34 AM
    Bay Alexison
    Thank you, and no problem!
  3. Nolafus
    4 Days Ago 07:40 PM
    Izzo dies from that? Well, I guess that's the only outcome, but it's not that clear that he dies right there. If anything, it could have been a small cut, so maybe filling out that part a bit more could make that more clear.

    More to come later! Haha
  4. Nolafus
    4 Days Ago 07:33 PM
    Hey, I just wanted to thank you for being so patient with my review. I'm doing it a bit differently, and rather than separating it by chapters, I'm just going to review the entire thing, but keep it to how it flows and everything. There's not that many grammar mistakes and nitpicks to point out. So I don't think I need to cover them.

    Anyway, I should have it done within a couple days, so thanks again for being so patient as I work through it.
    4 Days Ago 11:58 AM
    Awesome, thank you. And I saw you have a new chapter up, so I'll try to read it by tonight.
  6. Lucifer-san
    5 Days Ago 01:32 PM
    Thanks for the review/critique session, I see what you mean with my writing being a bit overly wordy I suppose. Quite a bit of people say that actually, though it still seems to be a problem I guess lol. Maybe I might post another short story hopefully I'll get better as time goes on.
  7. Ice
    1 Week Ago 06:55 AM
    Aha. We don't use voice chat, and most of us don't use their real names, or locations, but I can totally see your point. I'll try to keep you up-to-date with anything important that is talked about.
  8. Ice
    1 Week Ago 06:16 AM
    Aha okay. We had some more indepth discussion about alchemy and artefacts in the skype chat. The idea is that the starting artefacts really aren't very strong. If you send me a PM with your skype name, I could add you to the group.
  9. Ice
    1 Week Ago 02:37 AM
    I am wondering, for Mr. Mido, how many artifacts do you plan on giving him, and how strong do you plan on making them?
  10. Ice
    1 Week Ago 11:41 AM
    Hey, good to see you show interest in Venice :)
  11. Bay Alexison
    3 Weeks Ago 10:25 PM
    Bay Alexison
    Three chapters in a row? D: Slow down! Granted, the chapters aren't that long, but I'm also doing another review for a different fic so it'll be a bit until I get to those.

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  • About Bardothren
    Reading, writing, videogames, anime, cello, rom hacks, that sort of stuff.
    In my fan-fiction
    Male ♂
    Picking what story to write, then wriiting it.
    Also Known As
    Bardan, Knight of Mavra
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Congratulations! Through your nitpicky behavior, willingness to teach, and need to torture yourself, you've somehow managed to complete this challenge.
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