Cirrus

I missed your birthday whhhyyyyyyyyy.

Happy b-day! ;D

I'm sorry for not posting an SU yet. Anyways, I have a question about something the aeloi can do: "...and their ability to collect and process information is unparalleled."

I wasn't sure if that meant aeloi were great at gathering information through spy networks and such, or if it was some sort of enhanced thinking/perception/reaction thing.

Yes indeedy, I play D&D.

Thanks~ I'll prioritize Thrashing Dragon and Iron Tortoise, as archery is a bit more situational.

Ah, that's useful information. Actually, that name fits him pretty well, I find - 'family peace'. That's one thing he would desire. As for the female nature of the name... I don't know about that. I liked the sound of the name. I can come up with something as to why he named himself that. ;)

Indeed, that's where I got it from, the ninja. I don't see how that harms the naming of my character... and I have no idea what a kanji is.

I like it the way it is. Is there any problem referencing Japan?

That would be appreciated~ I'm honestly kind of wary about how many I should have her utilize, because of the information given, but I figure that this is a "great destiny" game, and she is entirely focused on fighting. The goal would be, I think, for her to become a Master of Nine, so to speak (If I'm guessing your inspiration for Martial Adepts correctly).

Looking over the styles listed, I think some particularly fitting ones are Thrashing Dragon (For strength, wild movements, unarmed combat), Iron Tortoise (All kinds of defending herself from attacks), and Solar Wind (Archery). But she'd benefit from taking inspiration from all of the others, save for Golden Lion, I think.

I've no clue of what you are talking about, but it still seems readable to me in the pictures you sent me. I get it can bother you, and I'd fix it if I could...

Oh? It seems fine to me... I remember having the same problem with my previous SU, what exactly seems to be wrong?