You no nothing of scripts if you can't tell the difference mine doesn't compile, mine isn't as sufficient as raptor's mystery gift, I DON'T THINK RAPTOR CAN GIVE EGGS/ITEMS EITHER SO YOU KNOW NOTHING!!!!!
EDIT: You can't judge me just yet, I haven't showed half my knowledge because of reasons like this....
You posted a thread into The Showcase section of the game dev forum.
I can't approve it as it does not meet the requirements. If you wish to have a thread in the showcase, it must include 12 in game shots. I suggest you put it in the Drawing Board with 2 in game shots.
Check out the rules for our section here: http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=204839