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  1. Buoysel
    November 19th, 2008 6:31 PM
    Buoysel
    Hows chapter 2 coming along?

    I finally started on a Fic that I had been wanting to write some time, I just couldn't come up with a plot.
  2. Buoysel
    November 12th, 2008 7:11 PM
    Buoysel
    Okay, I will tape my eyelids open if I have too to stay awake to make sure that I get the story back to you before I go to sleep.
  3. Buoysel
    November 12th, 2008 6:52 PM
    Buoysel
    I am working on your chapter, you can beat me later for taking so long.

    Anyway where are you going to end the chapter, I need to know where I can stop editing. Are you going to finish the chapter just before the flashback?
  4. Buoysel
    November 11th, 2008 10:23 PM
    Buoysel
    I'm really sorry its taking me so long, Its supposed to be rainy tomorrow, and I don't have to work, so I'll make sure I get the rest of that chapter back to you.
  5. Buoysel
    November 9th, 2008 9:25 AM
    Buoysel
    I have no idea what you mean by the last part, and that was my almost exact reaction.

    I was like "Ohoo that has toaahhahahahaha."
  6. billie_lightning
    November 9th, 2008 12:22 AM
    billie_lightning
    My character is originally from Lavender So they could connect through that maybe

    don't forget Brock! He's goin' down! >D
  7. Buoysel
    November 8th, 2008 11:29 PM
    Buoysel
    I like funny things, I also like Buizel, so...

    Maybe its getting attacked, either way it's getting its but burned.
  8. Buoysel
    November 8th, 2008 9:02 PM
    Buoysel
    I have an answer to your question.

    I am torn really, I think that either place would be a good place to stop the chapter. The first one is great, it leaves the reader wondering.

    However; the way you end it is... great. It shows some character development, and a little but of humor. I think that Syd's recation could be worked on, but it's still worth keeping, so I'm sorry I am not much help here.

    Either way, the chapter ends with enough of a cliff hanger for the reader to be chomping at the bit for the next chapter.
  9. Buoysel
    November 8th, 2008 8:49 PM
    Buoysel
    Sorry its taking so long with beating, I am working on it.
  10. billie_lightning
    November 8th, 2008 8:10 PM
    billie_lightning
    if it goes against your character, you don't have to. Or we could write it in a way that made it seem forced, lol.
    Hahaha
    "Where are the Vine Whips coming from!?!?!"
  11. billie_lightning
    November 8th, 2008 7:35 PM
    billie_lightning
    hey cool dude
    I'm looking forward to partnering up in the RP =D
  12. Buoysel
    November 2nd, 2008 6:01 PM
    Buoysel
    I'm working on your story now, but I have a question: Is "Syd" supposed to speak with bad grammar?
  13. An-chan
    November 2nd, 2008 3:21 PM
    An-chan
    Good to have you back o> With you and jeffb- I mean POB gone for a while, I've done practically nothing else than slacked off. Now maybe I can get something done, too...
  14. TriVu
    November 1st, 2008 2:42 PM
    TriVu
    Lol XD
    That was my 3rd/4th option, I retook the test
  15. TriVu
    November 1st, 2008 2:20 PM
    TriVu
    Thanks :D
    You are very mature aren't you

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