I thought that it would've flowed alright as long as you took off the last sentence or two. Her post was about you talking in the camp, while yours seemed more like a character development (guilt trip) for your character and was a transition between the two.
But it's your post *shrugs*
And sorry for bunnying your character so much in my posts. You can do the same to mine in your posts
Yo mate not that im telling you to but if i where you i wouldent except any more sign ups.
Why?
Well i dont know if you have noticed but theres a new post like every ten minutes just a suggestion.
PS i know theres meant to be 13 but like i said its just a suggestion.
Lol Charky, might want to check on the post and make some rules, maybe an OOC thread, cuz the Rp is getting stuffed up with thrash. (No offense tough) But posts like:
He picked up two berries and ate one of them.
^Thats not a Roleplay Post
Im just saying cuz ur RolePlay might be stoppe or get suspended