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  1. Nideous
    October 9th, 2011 06:04 PM
    Nideous
    Strangely enough, it wasn't that bad having Lucien in Thomas's head. Anyways, now that his heart has been cut away, what next? Because Thomas is without feeling, but he's not quite zombied yet. :D And his heart isn't gone, it's just not connected to his mind anymore. You won't be able to remove his heart completely without removing his powers. As his light is driven by his emotion. :D

  2. Nideous
    October 9th, 2011 05:32 PM
    Nideous
    I saw. XD And poor Thomas. He's going to need some major therapy after that. And we are totally nuts. It's why we can always come up with awesome stuff to write.

  3. Miss Doronjo
    October 9th, 2011 05:28 PM
    Miss Doronjo
    Yup~!! :3

  4. Nideous
    October 9th, 2011 04:59 PM
    Nideous
    XD Probably does. XD

    Draco, he's making things more difficult for himself.:D

  5. Nideous
    October 9th, 2011 04:34 PM
    Nideous
    XD Thomas is going to be messed up good. :D Anyways, Number two should work.

    Yes. Worse.

  6. Nideous
    October 9th, 2011 04:26 PM
    Nideous
    Well, I can't think of anything. XD Any of those choices work. And Thomas is going to be messed up for a while, even if he isn't under Theo's control. It's going to be until Esper comes around and uses his own psychic powers to help fix him. XD

    No, he shouldn't. The mere sound of his voice makes Ash want to drop kick him. :D

  7. Nideous
    October 9th, 2011 04:17 PM
    Nideous
    But then, how would Zoran be brought back? And that wouldn't snap Thomas out of it. Not completely. But Zoran's death might. And of course, while Thomas is shaking it off, Marcus would go after Theo. I see how this works. :D

  8. Sgt Shock
    October 9th, 2011 04:17 PM
    Sgt Shock
    Whew, sorry it took me so long. Had to go through the chapter and read the comments. I'm a slow, methodical reader--only because I try to soak in all the information.

    At any rate, that was the harsh truth in the matter. But, I'm finding it hard to disagree with anything that you said (you were heavily sarcastic towards the end). Personally, I think the chapter needs some work. I think that her main problems are narration and dialogue (the two main cores of writing). But, I must say that I liked the advice of observing and overhearing people to understand how people work. I do this most of the time without even realizing it, and soak in different types of personalities.

    Overall, it was harsh, but truthful. But from what I can remember, you did mention that you wasn't going to pull any punches.

  9. Nideous
    October 9th, 2011 03:56 PM
    Nideous
    Hm... Just don't turn it into DBZ. XD Don't die and come back more times than you can count. :D And don't forget about Thomas and Van. They'd lose it too. XD

  10. Nideous
    October 9th, 2011 03:46 PM
    Nideous
    She probably would if Zoran died. O.o Now there's an idea. Zoran dying and then being brought back to life. XD

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    Hiya! I'm an otaku. I really like helping others out with their writing or anything I can. I'll happily take a listen to stuff. I can roleplay pretty well, but slowly. My favorite animes are anything from Higurashi to Pokemon to Digimon to Puella Magi Madoka Magica. Do you have something to recommend? I'll take a peek! :)
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