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  1. countryemo
    July 22nd, 2011 3:58 AM
    countryemo
    See there not much worry.
  2. Pyrax
    July 21st, 2011 4:15 PM
    Pyrax
    EGI 3+-PEGI 12?
    Forget that, be a rebel and get 16+ :p
  3. countryemo
    July 21st, 2011 2:45 PM
    countryemo
    Hm I saw your thread. (Wrong place btw)
    So year 6, your 10. (I dont know the UK to well). So I presume shes older then you, haha.

    And hmmm. I know how you feel. I guess if you really do like her, dont let go. Ok so shes going on. Is their any other way you guys can meet up and so on (there has to be, rite?) Thats pretty much the only thing you can do Hope & Try. :)
  4. zappyspiker
    July 9th, 2011 6:40 PM
    zappyspiker
    Hey~
  5. 560cool.
    June 2nd, 2011 1:10 PM
    560cool.
    yes. I;m like resurrected from the hell that is Minecraft. ;_;
  6. 560cool.
    May 22nd, 2011 1:18 PM
    560cool.
    Uhhh, hi ? xD
  7. Larq
    May 4th, 2011 7:24 AM
    Larq
    Kay, I've got your Samurott. Just let me know when you're able to trade.
  8. Anna
    May 2nd, 2011 8:47 AM
    Anna
    When she gets back- i.e. next weekend I think.
  9. Reiyu
    May 1st, 2011 8:04 PM
    Reiyu
    I can trade and trade back your boldore to help evolve it (-) i had the same prob till a while ago lol!
  10. Larq
    May 1st, 2011 7:36 AM
    Larq
    Kay, I'll have it done sometime today. :D
    Hey, is the Charmander nickname-able, or did you get it from someone else?
  11. bobandbill
    May 1st, 2011 4:27 AM
    bobandbill
    Well there's still the line spacing gap thing you could implement (so e.g.

    Quote:
    Paragraph one.

    Paragraph two!

    Dialogue from someone! More dialogue from the same person on the same line!

    Someone else is now talking so new spacing is used!
    As opposed to what you are doing throughout ie:
    Quote:
    Paragraph one.
    Paragraph two.
    Dialogue for someone.
    Sam person is still talking.
    Different person is speaking now.

    As for the further additions, there's more than just adding in events - for instance:
    Quote:
    "Ok!"
    "Now, Touko. Come over here!"
    The Professor and Touko walked over to the shop.
    "This is the Pokemart! this is where you can buy items for your journey ahead!"
    "Thanks Professor!"
    "No problem Touko, have a safe journey!"
    Sure this shows us more of what actually happens, but what does happen isn't that interesting nor tell us much about the characters or setting. For instance to make this more interesting, detail how she says things (is she patient and happy to tell Touko what a mart is even though arguably a person who is 10 or years older should know what a shop looks like, or maybe tired, or so forth?) and what things and places look like (is this shop big or small? Is there a lot of people shopping, or is it empty save for the shop keepers?). Make the stuff you add in interesting to read about - show rather than tell, as it's more interesting to read when one can visualise what things look like or how they are done. There's more on showing rather than telling in those guides linked to at the bottom of the rules if memory serves btw.
  12. bobandbill
    May 1st, 2011 3:02 AM
    bobandbill
    It's better already. =) I still feel a bit more could be added in however e.g. although you put in more about the professor showing her about, it still feels a bit rushed to me. More examples of additions to consider in say the quote I used below would be to consider how the rest of the crowd also reacted or how they walked off - essentially consider each event in your story and how everyone/thing would react to said event.

    As for the correct way to go with formatting in regards to spacing, there's no need to make a new paragraph for every sentence spoken (ie with Ghetsis' speech in particular), and use a line gape spacing between each actual paragraph. So for instance:
    Quote:
    Everyone, I end my words here today by imploring you to consider the relationship between people and Pokémon... and the correct way to proceed.
    We sincerely appreciate your attention."
    The man and all his minions walked off.
    "Woah, what the hell was that?" Touko was confused.

    would be better as:
    Quote:
    Everyone, I end my words here today by imploring you to consider the relationship between people and Pokémon... and the correct way to proceed. We sincerely appreciate your attention." The man and all his minions walked off.

    "Woah, what the hell was that?" Touko was confused.
    Hope that helps.
  13. Anna
    April 30th, 2011 5:09 PM
    Anna
    Not really. She claims she doesn't know what to do on the forums.
  14. Larq
    April 30th, 2011 12:37 PM
    Larq
    I could do that for you. I'll start on the Oshawott, and we can arrange to trade over your Golett soon.
  15. Larq
    April 30th, 2011 9:52 AM
    Larq
    I have the pre-evolutions, but I'd gladly level/evolve them up for you.

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