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  1. bobandbill
    May 1st, 2011 03:02 AM
    bobandbill
    It's better already. =) I still feel a bit more could be added in however e.g. although you put in more about the professor showing her about, it still feels a bit rushed to me. More examples of additions to consider in say the quote I used below would be to consider how the rest of the crowd also reacted or how they walked off - essentially consider each event in your story and how everyone/thing would react to said event.

    As for the correct way to go with formatting in regards to spacing, there's no need to make a new paragraph for every sentence spoken (ie with Ghetsis' speech in particular), and use a line gape spacing between each actual paragraph. So for instance:
    Quote:
    Everyone, I end my words here today by imploring you to consider the relationship between people and Pokémon... and the correct way to proceed.
    We sincerely appreciate your attention."
    The man and all his minions walked off.
    "Woah, what the hell was that?" Touko was confused.

    would be better as:
    Quote:
    Everyone, I end my words here today by imploring you to consider the relationship between people and Pokémon... and the correct way to proceed. We sincerely appreciate your attention." The man and all his minions walked off.

    "Woah, what the hell was that?" Touko was confused.
    Hope that helps.
  2. Aquacorde
    April 30th, 2011 05:09 PM
    Aquacorde
    Not really. She claims she doesn't know what to do on the forums.
  3. Larq
    April 30th, 2011 12:37 PM
    Larq
    I could do that for you. I'll start on the Oshawott, and we can arrange to trade over your Golett soon.
  4. Larq
    April 30th, 2011 09:52 AM
    Larq
    I have the pre-evolutions, but I'd gladly level/evolve them up for you.
  5. polkop
    April 30th, 2011 08:03 AM
    polkop
    Thanks
  6. polkop
    April 30th, 2011 07:56 AM
    polkop
    Sorry, I've a problem wih my WI-FI.
    All is OK now.
  7. polkop
    April 30th, 2011 07:49 AM
    polkop
    Thanks
    My FC is 4856-6663-4722
    See you on WI-FI.
  8. polkop
    April 30th, 2011 07:36 AM
    polkop
    Do you still need to evolve Boldore?
  9. Nuke
    April 30th, 2011 06:10 AM
    Nuke
    Either way.. :(
  10. Nuke
    April 30th, 2011 06:07 AM
    Nuke
    Oh well.

    Stupid outdated internet security. :(

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