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  1. Jönne
    May 20th, 2012 1:45 AM
    Jönne
    Actually, the theft was unintentional, crazy as it sounds. I have adopted Blados as a second name for my characters ever since I browsed some Dark Dawn forums.. as for Isaac, I've always wanted to name one of them Isaac. xD But I'll try to find another second name, if you want it changed. I'm just having trouble finding a name that doesn't sound so 21st century.

    Alright, I wasn't aiming for all-powerful like, just important. But yeah simply mercantile will work, too.. lol
  2. SV
    May 19th, 2012 11:38 PM
    SV
    Wow...this actually fits much more than I could have hoped for. Thanks. I appreciate it, and the background info as well!
  3. SV
    May 19th, 2012 9:59 PM
    SV
    I noticed in your 'location' section is written Eleusis. I like the word, and I was wondering if I might be able to steal borrow it for something RP-related. I promise it is nothing malicious.
  4. Jönne
    May 19th, 2012 8:28 AM
    Jönne
    Yes, yes - I'm quite the name stealer. xD I haven't played the DS one, though.

    Isaac's parents have broken connections with his uncle. That's why it was so easy for the merchants to kill him. The reason to why they are distant, I was hoping I could include something like a "side quest" about Isaac, if the flow of the RP allowed it.

    I could edit that part so his family is merely a rich one, if there's any particular problem?
  5. parallelzero
    May 18th, 2012 4:55 PM
    parallelzero
    Thank you for the Arianne being female. Otherwise Crea was going to be... well, it's hard to be a teenaged girl amidst a group of older men. T.T

    Well, I assume, anyways.
  6. Jönne
    May 18th, 2012 12:51 PM
    Jönne
    Alright.. I still see no problem with it, lol.

    I'll see into editing my post right away.
  7. Jönne
    May 18th, 2012 12:34 PM
    Jönne
    I see nothing wrong with the formation of my SU, really.. lol Maybe it's just your bandwidth? As for the spelling mistakes, I think more than I type. Hope that's understandable, as I've no spell check. xD I'll fix 'em, though

    Hm. What kind of light swords exist, then?

    Last line should explain it now.
  8. Cirrus
    May 18th, 2012 12:27 PM
    Cirrus
    Add lines in between paragraphs, and try not to leave lines stranded by themselves on the page (corroborate them into larger paragraphs). This will help readability. I spot a few spelling mistakes (or maybe just one, I dunno) so fix those too!

    Also katanas don't exist, unfortunately. ; o

    Hmm... your character needs some motivation. Why would he join a band of mercenaries? He seems more likely to work by himself.
  9. Jönne
    May 18th, 2012 12:19 PM
    Jönne
    I have literally no idea what you're talking about. Just tell me how to fix it. xD
  10. Jönne
    May 17th, 2012 5:23 AM
    Jönne
    So you're actually greek? ;B

    Well the thing is I, umm.. kinda started writing about a character with a similar personality to the muse. xD; Maybe you'd like to have a look at it? I can write something else, though, I have something in mind.

    I'll do my best. Your RP looks so pro. xD
  11. Jönne
    May 16th, 2012 11:26 AM
    Jönne
    Eleusis? As in, Ελευσίνα? ;D

    Is there another spot in your RP, by the way? I see Arianne's legend open, but I'm not sure if I HAD to choose a legend or not.
  12. Quest
    May 14th, 2012 6:32 AM
    Quest
    What's an Rper if they're not dedicated?

    On the case of being a consultant, I'd be delighted. Even though my character won't be as important as the others, I think she'll be the least bit cardinal in some ways. I won't be inactive too much, if at all. ('ve actually been surprisingly good at dividing up my time as of late...)

    Either way, I'm glad that you did decide to accept me, even in the way you did.
  13. Quest
    May 12th, 2012 8:05 PM
    Quest
    I understand where you are going with this. Ultimately, I'll be fine with whatever choice you make.

    Anyways in an attempt to at least make myself a little bit happier with what you decide, I revamped the whole thing a little more. I deleted some of the things that were a bit repetitive in the writing and switched out many for synonyms that wouldn't harm it to much. I added a bit more to the sample (again) and made sure that it flowed well in most cases.
  14. parallelzero
    May 12th, 2012 12:38 AM
    parallelzero
    I'd say probably 30 years after FSN, 40 after FZ. Emiya Kiritsugu had any sequential wars rigged to be terminated after Heaven's Feel 4 (though Heaven's Feel 5 took place earlier than expected, thus undermining his plans). So, if Heaven's Feel 6 were to take place, I'm sure 40 years is enough time for the dynamite Kuritsugu laid to have diffused. Since the Grail is technically "gone" anyways, it probably wouldn't even trigger that system. And since the Magecraft Association opposed the Fuyuki Grail and had it dismantled, it'll be more of a "SURPRISE SUCKERS" when it actually goes down. XD
  15. parallelzero
    May 11th, 2012 5:35 PM
    parallelzero
    So I was thinking the best way to go about it might be to hold a Heaven's Feel 6 that takes place a few decades after the end of the true end of Heaven's Feel. Since it's implied there would be no more Grail Wars after, it'd give at least an interesting scenario where the Masters have no preparation or overall awareness of the war before it happens. As for the reason for a new Heaven's Feel, I'm thinking of weaving it into my antagonist's backstory.

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    Cirrus is a guy who likes to procrastinate. The quality of his work is usually pretty good, but the lack of time management skills has led him to believe that teleportation should be researched as soon as possible as a technology so that he wouldn't have to waste time getting to places. He dreams of one day owning a helicopter to fly above all the traffic, thus becoming able to commute without being affected by rush hour or transit service delays.
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    Heatran.
    Chandelure.
    Roserade.
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