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  1. jackblaze
    June 23rd, 2012 5:39 PM
    jackblaze
    Yes very much so
  2. Swolligator
    June 11th, 2012 7:58 PM
    Swolligator
    Hey man, just checking where you were with writing a post for Atlantis Arising?
  3. SkyisUmbreon
    May 22nd, 2012 11:45 AM
    SkyisUmbreon
    Hah, yeah recently I've been revisiting some anime's and bleach came up, and I started joining some rps on different sites
  4. Cirrus
    May 22nd, 2012 10:41 AM
    Cirrus
    You don't need that paragraph actually - you're probably not going to be with us at first, and we'll pick you up as the story progresses.
  5. Cirrus
    May 14th, 2012 5:08 PM
    Cirrus
    Let me know when you've edited your background sufficiently so I can make an announcement about it. /: I
  6. Cirrus
    May 13th, 2012 7:29 PM
    Cirrus
    I can see you've done some good work on your sign-up, which shows a lot of dedication (considering I've sent you back to the drawing board, what, twice already? Three times?) - so, though your character's still not going to fill the spot for Arianne (=[), I will offer you instead the opportunity to play a member of the mercenary band who is not a legend personified. It doesn't make a whole lot of sense to only have six people, but that restriction was necessary because a multitude of roleplayers is a sure recipe for a swift death.

    I still feel somewhat iffy about your name, so as long as you change it to something appropriate to the setting (not so common a given name nor technically an abbreviated form such as "Bella", which is better off being "Isabella" or "Isabelle" or some variant - not that I'm telling you to change it to either of these, though if you wanted to keep "Bella" it would be ideal that you did) you'll be good to go. Your role will be the primary consulting arcanist, and you will have had opportunity to procure some combat experience already so you can revise that or add it into your story.

    However - a word of warning; if inactivity occurs, eventually your character will be treated as an NPC (if you don't show up within something like three weeks) but I don't expect that to happen, so you should be fine.
  7. jackblaze
    May 11th, 2012 7:40 PM
    jackblaze
    Hey whats happening with the bleach rp?
  8. Swolligator
    May 11th, 2012 2:32 AM
    Swolligator
    Hey man, not to rush you or anything, but we are just waiting for your final post so we can move on in the roleplay.....
  9. Cirrus
    May 10th, 2012 7:45 PM
    Cirrus
    It's certainly better now. Your SU is easier to read, certainly. : o

    The RP sample is still somewhat clunky, though; I would probably accept you if you were applying for another role other than Arianne - after comparison to other candidates, of course, but it's somewhat acceptable. (Yes, she's very intrinsic to the story and thus I need her to be played well - or at least, uh, in a manner that allows my planned interactions to occur properly, which is also why I'm considering playing her myself. : <)

    Smoothness in writing is not something that can be achieved overnight, unfortunately. I'm still working on it as well, so you know.
  10. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    May 10th, 2012 6:17 PM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    Thank you kindly. c:
  11. Cirrus
    May 8th, 2012 6:40 PM
    Cirrus
    It feels like every aspect of your description is described in the same transparent way. Your sentences don't really lead into one another effectively, nor do they feel fluid when I read them. Repetition of garnish words like adjectives and adverbs is also something to avoid when they're close to each other, I feel, to avoid monotony (though there are cases when this is acceptable and powerful). Essentially, your writing is what I would describe as clumsy. Plus, your RP sample doesn't really have a defined structure - though it had a focus on conversation, it wasn't really treating the conversation differently from the actions, nor was it centering in on the conversation as something of importance.

    Here are some comments from the friend of mine who was helping me judge, related to your RP sample:

    Quote:
    "He doesn't leave out any details at all, but that means a lot of the insignificant stuff gets left in and clutters up the prose. We don't need "he said as he took a bite of his egg" for five sentences straight."
    He liked your character's personality, though. =)
  12. Cirrus
    May 8th, 2012 4:14 PM
    Cirrus
    It's really just one thing; blandness. Mechanically you're pretty okay, but I don't feel the vibrancy of the character, which is pretty important for me. I'll describe this in more detail if you want me to. : o
  13. MichaelaTheUchiha
    May 6th, 2012 10:51 AM
    MichaelaTheUchiha
    I've stated something on the OOC thread on TTT (The Tabi Tournament). Please read it if you want to continue with the RP. If you don't, then you don't have to read it.
  14. d4rka8isz
    May 2nd, 2012 4:03 PM
    d4rka8isz
    Sorry, but I can't think of anything to put in the SU. Been really busy these past weeks too.
  15. Rose Quartz
    May 2nd, 2012 1:24 PM
    Rose Quartz
    yes i am thats also said in the spoiler "spots" it said that i could add more spots

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    Nothing really. I'm just one of those nerds that like Pokemon!
    Interests
    Well, I'm a writer and enjoy to make stories and Roleplay. I play the drums and am currently learning to play the guitar and piano. I draw as well, though, this hasn't really happened as of late.

    I'm currently interested in the gaming industry and all it's aspects.
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