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  1. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 10:55 AM
    MeerFall
    yeah but it will still encorge us to go on bad sites
  2. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 10:51 AM
    MeerFall
    i don't know i'll ask...

    apperaltly we would go on more dung things and we would get more and more virus, acorrding to my big sister
  3. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 10:47 AM
    MeerFall
    ...
    the problem is that i'm not allowed to install java...
  4. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 10:38 AM
    MeerFall
    I know :D:D:D


    lol XD
  5. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 10:33 AM
    MeerFall
    I would love to live in japan with all of their cool tecnology :D
  6. JX Valentine
    February 17th, 2011 10:28 AM
    JX Valentine
    Thanks for taking it so well. I was just a bit worried about how MeerFall would react. I know she's not too confident as it is, so... yeah.

    Good luck, by the way. If you need any help or advice about getting your reviews to be a bit more constructive, feel free to ask. b)'')b
  7. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 10:27 AM
    MeerFall
    OMG japanese too! maybe chinese too! :D
  8. JX Valentine
    February 17th, 2011 10:23 AM
    JX Valentine
    I hope you don't mind a bit of concrit (and I hope you don't take this the wrong way or anything), but I'm a bit worried about the way you worded that review to MeerFall (and the way you word reviews like it). You know how you say that a structure/rhyme scheme/grammar/insert something else here aren't too good, but you don't really expand upon it? That can actually be taken as an insult by sensitive writers. To avoid that, it'd be best to point out specific parts of the poem (lines, for example) that you felt could be improved or at least describe in detail what you mean. (For example, if you want to say that a rhyme scheme isn't too good, describe what is a good rhyme scheme and what the difference is between what they're doing and what you think they should do.)

    Don't tell an author that what they're doing isn't too good, especially if you're not going to elaborate much. You can say that there's room for improvement or that they might need to polish things a bit, but saying that something "isn't too good" or "has a few errors" (especially without saying what you mean) tends to make them think they're not good at poetry, period, you know? I know MeerFall and you are good enough friends that she'll know you don't mean she's a terrible writer or anything, but a newbie might not take that quite as well.

    (I also know that you've been reviewing this way for awhile, but even so, it's risking stirring a fuss. That and pointing out specifics will help a person figure out what they should do to improve. Just saying "the rhyming isn't too well done" could mean a lot of different things, so it doesn't really help too much, at the risk of putting things a bit too bluntly.)
  9. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 10:19 AM
    MeerFall
    i just added that it was based on the final fantasy series for people like me that don't know what it is...
  10. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 10:14 AM
    MeerFall
    how are you doing?
  11. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 5:35 AM
    MeerFall
    did you PM me it?
  12. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 12:28 AM
    MeerFall
    go on to my threads and its at the bottem
  13. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 12:16 AM
    MeerFall
    wait it accepted hurry!
  14. MeerFall
    February 17th, 2011 12:15 AM
    MeerFall
    yeah i'm great but i was bored yesterday

    i don't know if its accepted yet but i told the moduator of the pokemon roleplays... she must be really buzy...
  15. ShaQuL
    February 16th, 2011 12:53 PM
    ShaQuL
    Hmmm... i'll try :D

About Me

  • About TJgamer
    Biography
    I'm a very imaginative person. My minor case of autism contributes to that.
    From what my parents say, I never spoke when I was very little, but now, I can talk quite a lot. In fact, sometimes my siblings find it annoying when my voice gets too loud.
    Ever since I was little, I loved to play games. When our family had a performa, Macintosh computer, I would very frequently put in a CD and play the games on it.
    It wasn't until a couple years ago when I found interest in game making. The games I would prefer to make in the future would be adventure, logic, and platformer games. I really have no interest in games that include violence, blood, gore, or profanities.
    I also do astronomy as a minor hobby. I have an amateur telescope and I occasional like to see through it. Both at the sky and at faraway locations upon the horizon.

    Also about two years back, I started gaining interest in Pokémon. And boy is it wonderful!
    I eventually found this site (I don't remember how) and I wanted to be a part of it. And it's great!
    I currently spend a lot of my time in the Poetry section here.

    I also met a really great girl here. MeerFall.
    She's my Valentine and best friend!
    Interests
    Game Developing, Game Playing, Writing, Animation, Programming, Drawing, etc.
    Gender
    Male ♂
    Nature
    Jolly
    Favorite Pokémon
    Lucario, Gengar, Haunter, Gallade, Squirtle, Banette, Mismagius, Treecko, Meganium, Froslass, Bayleef, Dragonite, Lapras, Riolu, Lanturn.
  • Signature
    Poetry can be sacred,
    It has power that I know,
    Learn to like it,
    and its beauty will really show.


    I believe in Jesus Christ. If you do too, and aren't scared to admit it, then put this in your signature.

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