Your fine just the way you are.But if you really want to please people like Sky,read there posts,and read a good book or too.I know I hate reading a lot,but I don't mean a lot,just maybe a chapter or too.Usually real authers are very good at being discriptive.
you aren't that bad. By the looks of it, it seems like you just need to be a bit more decriptive. Like when your character says something, in your post, explain how they said it, what they were doing when they said it, how they were feeling, and what was happening around them. Okay, not all of that has to be added, thats just some things that can be included.
I don't know how much help I'll be, people don't usually ask me for help.
this is all i can say for now
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