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  1. Incinermyn
    October 15th, 2014 11:20 AM
    Incinermyn
    Electric-type dog perhaps? Also, yeah, I'm still into reading/critiquing stories, though I'm no longer actively writing my own stuff.

    Coincidentally, I have had a few people ask for me to write a few short stories for them on Furaffinity (I'd link a recent Pokémon-related example, but the site's having issues today... >.>).

  2. Incinermyn
    October 15th, 2014 11:10 AM
    Incinermyn
    Mmm, sounds like...The Inheritance Cycle? No, The Inheritance Cycle was completely different and totally fell apart plot-wise after Book 1-Eragon.

    Oh, have you made an outline for the general plot? It's a good way to keep focused, even if you don't stay entirely on track with it.

    On a side note, I had something similar planned for Feral Twilight too, but they were separate parts to the same Book. Part One was Lost in Longing, focused on Jay's lust for vengeance against his sister after he lost his title to her (the theme tying into the in-story deity Corros's symbolism of greed/envy/lust/etc.); Part Two was Found in Fury, and focused on Jay's growing anger during his quest to stop Otulp's ultimate ambition to destroy humanity (symbolic of the deity Vaspudem's theme of fury/rage/hatred/etc.); Part Three would've been Tried by Terror, where Jay finally gained the means to confront Otulp only to a serious personal loss (Otulp is symbolic of fear/terror/anguish/etc. in the story); and Part Four was to be The Lost Goddess, which was sort of an epilogue where Jay goes on a mission to reawaken the spirituality of the three gods' mother (whom is an all-powerful being that forsook her emotions to become an entity of pure logic). Ultimately, I think it may've just fallen apart by Part Three because the plot was way too lengthy to keep together without massive revisions to the entire story from the beginning.

    ...Ick, sorry for all this story talk... I really intend to focus on helping you, if you need advice. I just have a bad tendency to get caught up in nostalgia...

  3. Incinermyn
    October 15th, 2014 10:45 AM
    Incinermyn
    Mmm, I wouldn't say that spoils anything. I've written really elaborate stories with extensive backgrounds too, and that sounds like the setup for a very extensive history. Judging by your prologue, though, you've got a long story ahead of you. It's almost comparable to Feral Twilight, wherein my main character Jay Christie only happened to become wrapped up in a terrifying conflict between the "old gods" from Ronac's mythology and the "new gods" from Sinnoh's creation myth (the prospect being that Otulp, a phantom wolf, considers Arceus an imposter deity seeking dominance over all life, while he in turn seeks to enforce his reign over everything as well). I could never get the plot going in full, though... :/

  4. Incinermyn
    October 15th, 2014 10:21 AM
    Incinermyn
    Any particular theology there? The best legendaries tie some kind of religious symbolism into their existence (i.e. Palkia and Dialga were gods in ancient Sinnoh. Likewise, Ho-oh was considered somewhat of a deity too). I've always found that sort symbolism plays very well into fanfics, such as the case of my Fakemon Otulp and his sisters who were consider the "God of Memories" by the indigenous peoples of my Ronac Region.

  5. Incinermyn
    October 15th, 2014 10:14 AM
    Incinermyn
    Yes, I did! That's a very good descriptive/narrative tactic. I've even gone so far as to describe my legendaries like that in my old fanfics (leaving an air of mystery to them to entice people to read on). Little tricks like that will keep people coming back to read, I assure you that.

  6. Incinermyn
    October 15th, 2014 08:48 AM
    Incinermyn
    Yep, no rush. It'll just be a light proofread.

  7. Incinermyn
    October 15th, 2014 08:41 AM
    Incinermyn
    Need a proofreader, or are you good? I'll take a moment to look it over for minor errors and the like, but I promise not to go overboard and tear it apart like I used to. I've actually made it a point to stop being overly thorough.

  8. Incinermyn
    October 14th, 2014 03:00 PM
    Incinermyn
    That's good. Wish I could say the same, but I put Feral Twilight and Biohazard away for good...

  9. Incinermyn
    October 11th, 2014 11:26 AM
    Incinermyn
    Yeah, Lickilicky and Tangrowth were kind of a waste... >.> I'm not too fond of Magmortar or Electivire either, but at least they're useful. Rhyperior was different to me because it wasn't so blatantly made just as a filler. It's a terrifying wall to be put up against if you know how to format its EVs and Moveset correctly.

  10. Incinermyn
    October 11th, 2014 08:32 AM
    Incinermyn
    Aye, sorry, but I have to disagree. Any Pokémon that evolves from a previous gen Pokémon can be portrayed as one from the previous region. That's at least the justification for it in the HG/SS remakes, and the PWT in Black/White 2. Then again, I've always been more into the later gens than the initial installments (even though I technically started in Gen 2). Ultimately, it's your call, though. I just wanted to put forth some ideas.

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