Legendarian Mistress

I'm reading your PM so give me a moment. :D

Yes.

? Wasn't aware there was still bad blood. X3. I have to get on AIM first so hold on. Too many open tabs... XD

THe focus and consistency that you will gain from NaNoWriMo will be able to be applied when you write a new bio for a character. The Questions I ask in the bios will help you apply them.

Putting it simply, once you're used to writing on one piece and focusing to keep the same plot moving and going, you can do the same with bios, only without the plot and more on the character development. It all depends on how well you adapt skills to a new setting.

I'm not editing them for you. I'm showing you aspects on where to improve them. Since SS and I both notice you rely heavily on the bios as a reference tool, I'm going to give you ways to help with that.

Your main issues are: Prioritization, Focus, and Consistency. These are close aspects of writing but are not same things. (I know this is long winded but bear with me.)

Priorities are what you pay the most attention to and you do that with description. Because humanity has a tendency to pinpoint one aspect of something and cling to it, they tend to put less effort into understanding and working on the rest. Everything is equally important to a story to make it good, let alone to the high standards you wish to obtain. Right now you need to shift your priorities more towards your character personality and history for the bios as well as interaction in your stories. It takes time but you need to gradually go through and fill out your characters as well rounded individuals. You focus too much on the technical aspects and descriptions of writing.

Focus is where your attention lies. That's something you struggle with, constantly inspired by something minor and not finishing what you already have. TO be blunt, it's why you have so many stories and so few completed. IT's also why your plot is so disjointed, you keep leaving and coming back with little to no memory of what was there before. That's the reason I encouraged NaNoWriMo to get you to practice focusing on one piece, regardless of length or decency. This will also assist with consistency. My remarks will help you reapply your focus .

I've got them. Thanks

No problem. :D

Do worry you will. I've known you long enough to know that you can catch up on your work in no time. You'll be ahead of schedule before anything.

Thanks.

I know exactly what you mean by that. :D Sometimes its too tough to even think at night, and you just want to crash in the bed.