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  1. liveitout
    July 7th, 2009 10:24 PM
    liveitout
    Hi,

    I just wanted to say that I loved Brave New World and Fahrenheit 451. Yaaay classics. I get all sentimental just thinking about it. o3o
  2. Lash
    June 27th, 2009 02:11 AM
    Lash
    Hey, I posted the fic I've been working on :D

    Pokemon - HeartGold and SoulSilver Adventure!
    Hope you enjoy it, I worked hard on it.
  3. Lash
    June 24th, 2009 06:26 PM
    Lash
    Nice.

    Though you said your hands were a little sore, I hope you don't shorten the chapters up in the future. You don't skimp on the details, which makes the story more desirable.
  4. Lash
    June 24th, 2009 01:57 PM
    Lash
    That seems like a fair break, especially considering how much you write.

    How many words were in that last chapter? I would check, but Microsoft Word is acting up, haha
  5. Lash
    June 24th, 2009 01:18 AM
    Lash
    Definitely my favorite chapter to date. The timing in the chapter from the beginning, to the Pikachu run in, and the Hypno battle was perfectly executed. I especially liked the circumstances for Metapod and Kakuna evolutions. How Psyduck was awake the entire chapter, and how we finally didn't get to know why until the main battle was superb. Applause shall be given, as that was a kickass chapter.
  6. Lash
    June 23rd, 2009 10:55 PM
    Lash
    Holy hell. I don't know if this was intentional, but did you notice that the third chapter is a wall of text? Did your enter key like break or something?

    Nevertheless, I look forward to reading it.
  7. Misheard Whisper
    June 21st, 2009 10:47 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    You bet I will! I like your style, dude!
  8. Misheard Whisper
    June 21st, 2009 10:03 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    Dude, I'm in high school. I can't complain. ~_^
  9. Misheard Whisper
    June 21st, 2009 09:51 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    Well, like I said, I'll sit down and read that soon. It looks like fun. You said in the FFL you're an English major?
  10. Misheard Whisper
    June 21st, 2009 09:36 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    Figured I'd continue this here instead of spamming up your fic thread.

    The irony is, I don't actually like Misty. Until I started reading some of the better fanfiction about her, I despised her. Weird, huh? Now, I see that she can have depth, even if canon doesn't actually give her any. Anime!Misty has no personality whatsoever; she's an OTP, and that's why I hated her. That's the wonderful thing about fanfiction, though. It's beautiful, the way people are free to interpret things as they will. Your interpretation of Misty, for example, was different enough to give her depth, yet similar enough that it didn't make me go "Wth? That's not Misty!" I also forgot to mention, I like the part at the end with the boy and his Pikachu. That's sweet.
  11. Lash
    June 21st, 2009 04:33 PM
    Lash
    No problem. And, can't wait, I'm sure it will be good.

    Chapter three after that with Viridian Forest, right?
  12. Lash
    June 21st, 2009 03:59 PM
    Lash
    Well, I'm not too good at reviews, but I'll do my best.

    Overall, a good chapter. I forgot if I've mentioned this, but I like the move you made by having different starters, away from the cliche. Anyways, that made for a better battle against the Trainer and his Machop. I only noticed a couple spelling errors, but I didn't notice any sentence errors. If there is, I'd have to read through it again, which I wouldn't mind.
    I like how full your chapters are too. Shortening them is something I would not recommend. If they were shorter, the chapters wouldn't be as full. I guess what I'm trying to say is, you have a good balance on chapter length. They're just right.

    edit: Yeah, like I said, I suck ass with reviews XD
    Anyways, I read what you said in the FFL, about 'deciding if its worth keeping up with'. If I wasn't a fan of the story, I'd still say yeah. Anyone who puts as much effort as you do into a chapter deserves the recognition for the chapters he/she writes.
    So yeah, definitely worth keeping up with :p
  13. Lash
    June 21st, 2009 03:16 AM
    Lash
    Can't wait.

    Another thing I can't wait for, the first gym battle. That ought to make for a good match, especially for Blue if he doesn't catch any Pokemon with a type advantage.

    Haha, I would ask if you're going to do the game style of hero VS E4, or bracket/tournament style, but that would probably be a major spoiler, wouldn't it?
  14. Lash
    June 21st, 2009 02:20 AM
    Lash
    I just consider an OT fic to have any kind of trainer going on the journey, made up or not, haha.

    But a retelling of Red and Blue in the sense of realism you use if an awesome combination, if I say so myself. I can't wait to see how you implement Team Rocket.
  15. Lash
    June 21st, 2009 02:06 AM
    Lash
    Well, I know it's an OT fic, but I don't know some of the backstory you posted in the FF lounge. I was so tempted to open up the spoiler, but couldn't.
    And everybody knows, spoiler means additional plot! Or at least that's what I think it probably is, haha.

    Before I'm done reading chapter 2 (Just got done reading the battle with that Machop), I would like to comment on how you write it. When I read you're writing, I'm not envisioning the cute little sprites, or how they appear in the anime.
    Rather, I see the Pokémon and everything else in the story as if it were happening here in the real world.

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    I'm particularly suited to the isolation of the world, and that is my strength.

    Pokemon Blak-The True Tale of Kanto

    Red is just a sixteen year-old teenager from Pallet Town. But when he leaves to defeat all 8 gyms across the region and become the Champion, with his best friend, Blue, he discovers that his Pokémon journey is far darker than what he imagined. Can Red become Champion without losing his life to Rocket along the way?

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