i dont like to say it but you have made a lot of gramatical errors in the screenies:
Example:1.) 6th screenie: really? well lets battle! Correction:Really? Well let's battle!
2.) 7th screenie: Oh!!!!wait i almost forgot!!!
you'll need this.... Correction: Oh!Wait...I almost forgot!
You'll need this...
3.) 9th screenie: You need to put a fullstop after 'closed'
tell me if you want more grammer checking!
I don't like to say it either, but your grammar isn't that good either.
1st bolded word: The word "don't" should have a " ' " on it.
Your corrections aren't accurate either.
Correction 1: Really? Well, let's battle!
Correction 2: Oh, wait! I almost forgot! You'll need this!
Paradox wouldn't like to have a grammar corrector with poor grammar.