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Researcher of Orange Lore

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  1. Liliana Vess
    2 Weeks Ago 04:13 PM
    Liliana Vess
    Hey there :)
  2. Evanlyn
    December 17th, 2014 04:52 AM
    Happy birthday, birthday buddy!
  3. elementalkeeper
    June 24th, 2011 12:24 AM
    Hi! Would you like to make a hack with us???
  4. Astinus
    February 24th, 2011 09:44 PM

    I'm reading through your fanfic, and am only up to chapter six. I doubt that I'll be able to catch up with it before my self-imposed deadline of twenty-four hours from now. Would you mind if I did a review up to where I can get to before the Reviewing Challenge ends? I'd still finish reading your fic and will review what I didn't get to read.

    Just asking because I didn't want to make it seem like I was cheating you out of a review.
  5. JX Valentine
    December 26th, 2010 09:00 PM
    JX Valentine
    Totally okay. It happens. b)'')b And I do agree with you that lots of authors in the FF&W deserve awesome reviews, too. Just be careful next time, and you'll be A-OK.
  6. JX Valentine
    December 19th, 2010 12:24 AM
    JX Valentine
    Side note, but, um... it's generally not a good idea to leave grammatical reviews if you make a lot of grammatical mistakes yourself. Not to be mean or anything. It's just a little bit of concrit. Always proofread your stuff before submitting.

    For example... you misspell "apostrophe" several times, use an archaic form of the word "spelled," misspell "separate," suggest incorrect capitalization (you never capitalize the first word of a dialogue tag if it follows the quote it's tied with unless the first word is a name), neglect to punctuate two sentences (the ones where you use smilies at the end), fail to put a comma in the compound sentence where you're commenting on a lack of commas, misuse a semicolon (putting one -- the only one in your post -- where you should use a colon because what follows it isn't an independent clause), and, at one point, didn't capitalize the pronoun I. I know. It sounds like a lot, but I was hoping that pointing out all of those errors can give you a good visual aid for the point here. Namely, a cleaner grammatical review is a good way to show off the skills you're trying to promote when you go to comment on someone else's story. In other words, telling someone they don't have great grammar while letting yourself make a lot of errors in the process just doesn't set a good example.

    It would also help if, when commenting on someone else's grammar, you explain why it's better to proofread and whatnot. The reason why I say this is because the end of your review seems to say that spelling and grammar isn't that important. (You say it's just spelling and grammatical errors that you're pointing out.) So, the writer doesn't walk away having learned much of anything at all. The same could be said if you didn't say that part because the writer wouldn't know why the things you're pointing out are mistakes, which means they won't be able to avoid similar problems in the future.

    So... yeah. Always try to proofread and explain things whenever you go over grammar and spelling. That way, your concrit will be a lot more valuable to the people you're reviewing.
  7. sab
    December 17th, 2010 07:39 AM
    Your welcome. For the past week or so, I've wished everyone whose birthday it's been a happy birthday.
  8. sab
    December 17th, 2010 05:00 AM
    Happy birthday!
  9. NekoNekoChan
    December 16th, 2010 05:52 PM

    Happy birthday to the both of us, then! =DDD
  10. Polizard
    December 16th, 2010 05:18 AM
    Wishing you a happy birthday (we have the same birthday)
  11. Blaziken Pie
    September 24th, 2009 05:56 AM
    Blaziken Pie
    ur mum

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  • About FlaafyFTW
    "Creativity fuels the imagination. Without imagination, we are empty."

    Food is my creativity, life is my imagination. Let's break some boundaries shall we?
    Video games, pokemon, writing stories and spending whatever money i seem to have to my name
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    Leafeon, Delibird, Flaafy, Octillery, Mamoswine
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