Hey dude, your character actually looks alright at first glance, but you need to post these things in the OOC thread. IC thread is for IC interactions only. I'd recommend revieweing the SU template to make sure you don't miss out on anything while you're there. |P
hey man, what i gave you is probably all that i could, school started again and i have little to no free time left that was my contribution for now. if you still need help in spring break, just tell me