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  1. Astinus
    July 18th, 2011 8:23 PM
    Astinus
    You should point out specifics of the story that you like. Instead of just saying "This is good", point out what in particular was good about that particular story. Like "This is good. I liked how you wrote [character]'s feelings toward [event]." Even that is better than a general "I like this."
  2. インフェルノの津波
    July 2nd, 2011 10:45 AM
    インフェルノの津波
    I wasn't planning too but it turns out that way anyway lol sure.
  3. インフェルノの津波
    July 1st, 2011 2:09 PM
    インフェルノの津波
    Ohh I understand now. It's fine.
  4. インフェルノの津波
    June 30th, 2011 12:35 PM
    インフェルノの津波
    Wait...I'm confused. Your character has Ground and Electric aura? Or am I reading it wrong?
  5. NatureKeeper
    June 26th, 2011 12:52 AM
    NatureKeeper
    Thanks for the criticism. I did some improvement to the previous two chapters.
  6. NatureKeeper
    June 23rd, 2011 6:47 PM
    NatureKeeper
    No problem.
  7. NatureKeeper
    June 23rd, 2011 6:36 PM
    NatureKeeper
    If your Pokémon games were real they'd be called Generation Alloy, lol.

    EDIT: In VMs, when somebody sends you one, you reply on his or her page, not yours.

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  • About luxuriate
    Location
    New Mexico
    Gender
    Male ♂
    Nature
    Quiet
    Favorite Pokémon
    Dunsparce
    Absol
    Tropius
  • Signature
    POKéMON
    BRASS - BRONZE - COPPER
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