poke_fan21

Are you a beginner RPer as well? Im still trying to get my way around these forums

Another thing, please don't switch between first person and third person and try not to use future tense. It's confusing.

You're post in Gladiators is way to short. Please be sure to make your posts longer in the future.

Work on your post consistancy. You're getting better, but now you're using both past and present tense, as well as future tense. Please. Don't. Do that. Pick a tense and stick with it.

You need to stop making your posts so short. Notice how everyone else can make a good five or six sentence post out of something like the funeral, where as you can barely make one? I'm getting very annoyed, and I'm sure the others are too. Short posts are grounds for booting you, remember. You haven't made even one good sized post. I'll give you a few more chances, but you're stretching it.

It's looking better. There is still one thing you can improve and that's the grammar.

In roleplay people refer their characters in third person. That means instead of "I am around 5ft 5in tall." you would say "Rafael Obeng is around 5ft 5in tall."

I know it seems kind of trivial, but it honestly drives some people crazy.

Then there's the spelling and grammar. I have here a spellcheck addon that will work with either Chrome or Firefox which will allow you to easily check your spelling and grammar.

Here's the Chrome version

Here's the Firefox version

If you install that addon you'll see a green checkmark with the letters ABC to the lower right of your posting boxs. If you click said checkmark it'll scan your post for any errors. With the exception of names it's pretty accurate.

If you simply run that over your SU and let it fix everything that isn't a name after you've switched to third person you should be good to go.

Sorry about asking you to do all this.

I've replied in the OOC thread to the SU. It needs some tweaking to be accepted, but if you're willing to work on it we can work on getting you in.

Okie day. Just gimme a bit to discuss it with the other GM

Yes please c:

Yes there are. There are currently spots available in Suicune Dorm and Raikou Dorm.