The first post of your thread is a bit of a mess and is uncomfortably long. There's a features lists which includes "stuff that will be in the next update" (there won't be a next update because it's completed), a placeholder Town Map, a few superfluous screenshots (why bother showing off the empty quest screen?), and generally a mass of screenshots and information that could be better off not existing or living inside spoilers. For example, should you be telling us about every single event and location in the game? Oh, and at least one screenshot with text was taken without using the Pokémon fonts, which doesn't look great.