Gym Leader Jake

theres your answer
dont ask who i am on the server its so obvious

no dont post it

Hey Jake, it's me, Tente from the PC server. Anyway, basically my only other suggestions for your Ultimate move thread is to:
- replace the hyphens with em dashes when necessary (—)
- try to give the post a more effective conclusion, because your current conclusion sort of paraphrases what you said at the top. Maybe summarize why the metagame has evolved to make the Ultimate moves obsolete, although you should explain the same thing in detail somewhere else in the post, as well.
-I think the biggest flaw was that you didn't really do much explaining as to why most of the moves outclassed the Ultimate moves; you just explained what the moves did and let people draw their own conclusions. Which is alright when people know the metagame very well, but people who don't might be left completely out of the loop. The post seems to lack power and substance because it seems empty, anyway.

I guess what I'm trying to say is that for the most part, you didn't include much more than what someone can look up themselves, since you mainly relied on readers to make their own conclusions (by comparing the moves). I think maybe to give the thread more depth, you could elaborate on why the Ultimate moves are outclassed in the current metagame.

I hope I don't sound too harsh! I haven't seen anybody touch the subject of the Ultimate moves before, so you definitely have a unique subject.

Anyway, I wish you luck! (And thank you for that battle earlier!)