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Good luck on the RP, dude.

Hey there! Just wanted to give you a heads up that I am doing some editing to the history portion of Boyce's SU. I felt that I ended it in an awkward place after reading through it a few more times, and decided to give a little more insight into his contact with the X-Men other then just quotes from his mental conversation with Professor Xavier during the incident. I also added a little more detail to his mutation section, because I again felt that it was a little dry. I've done a lot of thinking (and maybe over-thinking), but I hope you enjoy my final product.

The edits start after Everything went dark...

I have not yet posted the edits, but I wanted to go ahead and let you know that they will be there.

Oh, geeze. I just picked a person/name and an ability I've been wanting to try out. I'm not much of a comic person so I don't know anything about the (lesser) superheroes/X-Men but I certainly wasn't trying to make a Dust Clone and I tried avoiding doing so.

Also, yeah I was having trouble deciding between outright Sand Manip and Sand Mimicry. I really like the length of these powers. I didn't know how much to include in my mutation section since I only read a little (at that point), but I think the development of her powers could go places (if accepted).

Anyway, thanks for the further information and I'm excited for the results.

I have. I used it to model aspects of the power, but threw in a little of my own spice to it for fun. Mostly the insanity bit. xD

Just dropping by to let you know the Sign-Up is done.

Awesome. I'll finish the writing sample when I'm not so under the weather.

Awesome, will do. What X-Men would be at the academy? Beast? Cyclops? Wolverine?

I hope you enjoyed my SU. I tried to keep Boyce from sounding too much like Storm, because that definitely wasn't what I was aiming for. Lol. Got stuck in parts, but I was so damn excited to see a X-Men roleplay that I pushed my way through it. Definitely happy to see someone come here with a X-Men roleplay, and a well-structured one at that.

Question: Would Xavier send a car to JFK to pick up Blake, or would he have to find his own way there. If he did send a car, then who would he send?

Awesome, well I've pretty much finished, just working on the Writing Sample at the moment.