Look, I do admit I was harsh, but you do need to improve. Please listen to us when we give you reviews. I was harsh because giving you positive reviews might not have gotten the point through. Lash is right, so listen to him.
You call this better, when you can't even comprehend how to spell Chikorita, or that when starting a new paragraph (if anything in there could be considered one), you need to hit enter twice. Take time when writing your chapter(s), make it actually sound good, and paint a good image in the readers head. I can guarantee you, no one, and I mean no one can get a good image when reading the abomination called WALL OF TEXT. Which happens when you only hit enter once.