Pok?mon Shadow Dancer

Well, I've been planing and making this game for a month now, an I made quite some progress, so, I'll post here:

Storyline:

nice thores cactus look kinda odd
besides that it looks good :)

By the looks of the cactus, they aren't cactus at all, they are probably withered trees.The desert is a bit plain, but the rest of the screenshots are alright.

The first desert map needs more filling. The second and third look great, but I think a few pathways might be nice.

Thanks, and about the cactuses, it's part of the Jelly Desert, the only with those cactuses. But it also contains normal now, and few of them.

Just for you to know, it will only be accessed later in the game ;)

Well, here are the things the game will contain:

-CBS (or CDBS, haven't decided yet)
-CMS
-Day/Night Cycle (underway)
-Minigames (Only one made yet)
-New Pok?mon (dunno the number)

Oh, and I'll try to fill the sesert more with rocks to not be so incomplete. Thanks for the tip. ;)

this game is lookin' good! Keep it up, nice screens, desert looks okay, you do need to put more paths though, can't wait for more!:)

The first screen is way too empty but it's a desert and deserts are usually vast and sparce anyway :\ Maybe adding rocks and those sandy 'paths' that are in the desert area of Ru/Sa/Em? They'd make the area look a bit more filled up.
The last two screens look pretty good but a bit blocky and square, if you know what I mean.

Yeah, I'll have to agree with you, Dawson. Thanks. I'll take care of that now.

Oh, by the way, here's a silhouette of a pok?mon appearing in the game I'll reveal it later...



I'll reveal more screen and stuff later. ;)

whao that looks like its gona be a kool pokemon :)):):):):)

The story is very interesting. :) The maps, though, could use a bit more revising. Just listen to Dawson. ;)

Well, I wish you good luck with your game.

Thanks everyone for the comments. Maps are now fixed, more natural, and all events added in maps made.

Here's a screen of Stroll Woods, a large forest with parts ony accessible later.

Sorry, to double post, but because no-one posted in a week, I had to :P

Well, here's the news:

1- Time to reveal the silhouette. Give a warm welcome to....


LUMINA

and here's its stats:

Name: Lumina
Type: Psychic/Ghost
Pok?dex Class: Shiny Ghost
Height: 29,25"" (75cm)
Weight: 1,105 lbs (0,5 Kg)
Ability: ??
Rarity: Uncommon
Evolution Chain: Lumina--Lv 36--> Luxia
Attacks:

Basic- Tackle
Basic- Scary Face
7- Mean Look
10- Confusion
12- Kinesis
14- Hypnosis
18- Night Shade
21- Nightmare
28- Reflect
28- Light Screen
31- Slam
36- Shadow Ball
38- Psychic
44- Psy Beam

Egg Moves

- Spite
- Body Slam
- Dream Eater
- Moonlight

TMs and HMs: ??
Move Tutor: ??
Steps to hatch: 480
Egg Group: ?? (Don't remember the groups)
Stats

HP: 30-40 (still not decided between those two)
Attack: 40
Defense: 20
Sp. Attack: 50
Sp. Defense: 40
Speed: 40

Male/Female Ratio (%): 40/60
Pok?dex Entry:

Lumina is said to be the ghost of a pure child. It roams around in sadness, wondering about his death.

2- INFO about the three mysterious persons: They appear in a real game.
(First to guess who they are gets a prize, more hints each post)

3-Locations done:

Fellmoore Town (the starting town)
Route 1
Professor's Cottage
Calmara Town
Jelly Desert
Forest Entrance
Stroll Forest
Route 2
Allumisia Town

the 3 people are... JESSIE JAMES AND MEOWTH????

OR

ASH MISTY AND BROCK

No... and (HINT) the three mysterious persons aren't from a Pok?mon Game. ;)

Harry Potter Herminone Granger And Ron Weasly????

Nope... and (HINT) They are the villains of that game.

Melfoy Crabbe Goyle, is that it?

no...

BIG HINT: They are from a look-a-like Wild West game.

Interesting...Can I Help You With Soemthing?

Well, what can you do? ;)

(HINT)- They wear robes.