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Well, the speech bubbles had a lot of extra room which took up space on the comic. Also, they weren't in any order. They were just kind of slapped on wherever there was empty space. Other than that, there were no severe issues.

I like that idea- and other than the speech bubbles, this is great so far c:

Your grammar is terrible, add some order to the Speech Bubbles.

O... M... G...

The text bubbles are destorying your comic dude ><
I suggest you fix it (Like everyone else said)
and put in more panels of comic. but pt the panels vertically, not horizontally.

Achamo-chan said:

O... M... G...

The text bubbles are destorying your comic dude ><
I suggest you fix it (Like everyone else said)
and put in more panels of comic. but pt the panels vertically, not horizontally.

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^I have to agree with Achamo^

Too short
Bubbles take up space
Doesn't really have a genre
I'm not saying it zucks, i'm just saying improvement nesscesary, I'd be a B in begginers, i was that bad before anyway :P

The bubbles do take up quite a lot of space, and i don't know if it was the way i read it, but the second one didnt really make much sense.

Perry! said:

The bubbles do take up quite a lot of space, and i don't know if it was the way i read it, but the second one didnt really make much sense.

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Ye, i agree with perry. But the comic hack was quite nice.

thnx willbey :D you're awesome. I guess a mod
can close this, zince everyone hates it + im to lazy to make more