Lollypop
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- Seen Sep 28, 2016
This is only a test fan-fic for suggestions and C&C. Currently only the Prologue is on.
P.S: I know it's short but this is only for Suggestions on how on I should improve.
Pre Chapter 1, Terrifying experience.
"Hehe, you've got no where to run now. Your trainer is almost
dead and now you've got no where to run little pikachu."Announces
James, one of the Team Rocket grunts. He is extremely dumb
and always tries to think of plans to capture rare pokemon and
always fails.
"Pika, pika!! Pikachu!!(You'll never catch me)" Squeaks Pikachu,
the famous pokemon trainer Ash's best pokemon. It is loyal to
Ash and Ash's amazing pokemon team. He wants to battle with
Ash until Ash becomes a Pokemon Master.
"Pika,Piiii......(Thunderbo)" Shouts Pikachu before the screen
turns pitch black.....
P.S: I know it's short but this is only for Suggestions on how on I should improve.
Pre Chapter 1, Terrifying experience.
"Hehe, you've got no where to run now. Your trainer is almost
dead and now you've got no where to run little pikachu."Announces
James, one of the Team Rocket grunts. He is extremely dumb
and always tries to think of plans to capture rare pokemon and
always fails.
"Pika, pika!! Pikachu!!(You'll never catch me)" Squeaks Pikachu,
the famous pokemon trainer Ash's best pokemon. It is loyal to
Ash and Ash's amazing pokemon team. He wants to battle with
Ash until Ash becomes a Pokemon Master.
"Pika,Piiii......(Thunderbo)" Shouts Pikachu before the screen
turns pitch black.....