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Old January 2nd, 2006 (11:07 PM).
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Kyaru-san
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Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Where You Think Get Out Of My Sight
Age: 26
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Nature: Timid
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I agree with Eikichi-kun,
First off you need to plan your Story better
2. Show some screen
3. Noone can't steal storyline here that'll be pointless
4. goto http://picceta.1.forumer.com/ they help you out
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