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Old February 25th, 2006, 12:59 AM
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Alter Ego
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It most definitely was. I don't usually enjoy stuff written in 'you' form, but this fanfic was a very touching piece of writing and kept me wanting to see what would happen next. Meh, I kind of figured that the Charizard would die but it was still sad. ;_; Although I'm usually one to harp on about descriptiveness, this one definitely doesn't need any more of it, in fact, I'm assuming that the lack of description was done on purpose. It definitely contributed to the mood nicely and kept my attention on what is essential. Oh, and I loved the little side-remarks made in the brackets (Hehee, I loved the Blisseys' personality. ). The whole look into the past thing was a nice touch too, funny and sad at the same time. Good work.
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