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Old February 26th, 2006 (08:48 PM).
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Saffire Persian
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Lack of description?

Hmm.. In some parts I suppose it was a bit lacking in description.. Such things as the appearance of *you* were left absent for a reason, yes. I thought I had an adequate amount of description though, and I myself thought the battle sequence had quite a bit of description.

But I guess that depends on the person.

And everybody loves the anti-paparazzi Blissey.

Thanks for the review!
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