FFotM (March 06) The Ties that Bind (One-Shot)
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February 27th, 2006, 04:48 AM
Feline of Light and Shadow
Join Date: Oct 2005
Lack of description?
Hmm.. In some parts I suppose it was a bit lacking in description.. Such things as the appearance of *you* were left absent for a reason, yes. I thought I had an adequate amount of description though, and I myself thought the battle sequence had quite a bit of description.
But I guess that depends on the person.
And everybody loves the anti-paparazzi Blissey.
Thanks for the review!
Battle ye not with a monster, lest ye become one.
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