[Saffire Persian]

Lack of description?

Hmm.. In some parts I suppose it was a bit lacking in description.. Such things as the appearance of *you* were left absent for a reason, yes. I thought I had an adequate amount of description though, and I myself thought the battle sequence had quite a bit of description.

But I guess that depends on the person.

And everybody loves the anti-paparazzi Blissey.

Thanks for the review!