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That was .. awesome. o.o Pure originality (allusions to Shakespeare?). I was really impressed by the way you imposed transitions, from one event to another. Who knew a simply doll exchange could lead to that...I'm wondering if Viola will ever see the grandfather/raichu again, and if Sebastian will play a bigger role in the future, as Viola is completing the tasks without him knowing. You executed the suspense well~
FFotM. <3 Really, really nice job. I'm curious about the next chapter. XD
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