FFotM (March 06) The Ties that Bind (One-Shot)
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April 20th, 2006 (7:07 PM).
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Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Kansas, USA
Its really good for a One-Shot.
(Alot of one-shots tend to lack things...)
But it was cool.
I also liked the fact that you made it a battle.
Its rare to see Pokemon Fanfics with actual battles in them..
Granted... there maybe alot of them on here, because I haven't read too many fanfics on here...but in general, battles are rare.
Still, you did a good job.
I found parts of it suspensful.
| previously: Drew
so i'll rewrite the story and i'll finally change all the rules
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