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Old April 20th, 2006 (07:07 PM).
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Awesome fic.
Its really good for a One-Shot.
(Alot of one-shots tend to lack things...)
But it was cool.
I also liked the fact that you made it a battle.
Its rare to see Pokemon Fanfics with actual battles in them..

Granted... there maybe alot of them on here, because I haven't read too many fanfics on here...but in general, battles are rare.

Still, you did a good job.
I found parts of it suspensful.
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